Dienstag, 1. Dezember 2009

Article

How genetics influence our life?


What can we do with genes? If you make a list of positive and negative possibilities it would be endless. In the last few years there was much research on genetics and nowadays genetics appear in almost every part in our life.

Every day we have to do with products which are gene-modified. Be it tomatoes, pumpkins or finished products, the economy uses genetics in every way to make more profit but this is not healthy for our body at all. While some are maybe not dangerous others can have really bad effect on our body. Most people simply have no clue about genetic engineering. Genetics are not only used in the food industry but also for criminal investigations. It is possible to expose criminals with the aid of modern equipment like cameras which recognise faces and compare them with the database of criminals. Just a fingerprint is enough to identify somebody. This is very helpful for the police whereas intelligences or other institutions can track somebody very easily. In a few years there may be a total control of governments and we are not able to move freely anymore.


In my opinion, genetics can be useful if we use it correctly and only for our own advantages. But we should rather stop the development of genetics than risk that there will be de-gene-ration in our society or a clone of each of us as a back-up store for organs.

1 Kommentar:

Guenter hat gesagt…

Look at your question!
Be more careful with paragraphing!

t: ... there has been much research ... (from past until now)
exp: "genetics appear" ... (You can't really say that. It's more what we DO with genetics that has become a part of our lives.)

exp: genetically modified

C? while some [what?] are not dangerous ...

g: a bad effect

g: Genetics is ... (This is a singular word.)

exp: 'intelligences' ?? [secret intelligence service]
exp: 'a total control of governments' ???

This is more like an essay than an article. An article is something you may find in a magazine. Stylistically articles are written differently to essays.